the micro-fiction contest [edition no. 4 - ft. zane]

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HAPPY SUNDAY, my dudes <3 Today I'm once more featuring our contest winner, who, as it happens, submitted not only two but THREE stories XD 

Hope you all will enjoy this little work of Zane's as much as you did before.






sometimes
i look up
and my heart skips a beat
because
i thought
just maybe
that it was you
i try to tell myself
to give up
because i know
that you are far far away
but i still do it
my heart still skips that beat
because what if
what if
one time
it really was you

// julia ryan





do you ever find yourself feeling like that in spite of yourself, about people you once knew? imagine you could continue this story - what happens to lizzie and joe??
TELL ME IN THE COMMENTS.

xx lisa

24 comments:

  1. Ivie BrooksSeptember 9, 2018 at 11:32 AM

    This is so cool!!!

    I love this story so much. I really felt a lot of the emotion in it. :D

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  2. Nicole DustSeptember 9, 2018 at 1:24 PM

    Awwwwww.....poor Lizzie. *silent tears* But dang, Zane, THREE STORIES?? I didn’t have time to submit ONE! (whoops) And the ones we’re read are so GOOOOD!

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    1. Zane JonesSeptember 9, 2018 at 5:29 PM

      Thank you so much!! Lol, I didn't have any time at that point so idk how I even wrote three stories anyway xD I think a lot of writing in the car?? Hehe.

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    2. Lisa ElisSeptember 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM

      Ikr, Nicole, how does Zane do it?? XD

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  3. Danielle JagoSeptember 9, 2018 at 3:08 PM

    Oh, I love this!! :D (I think I need to monitor how many times a day I say that... hehe!)
    SERIOUSLY, great job!!! <3

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  4. Analia @ Wild PenningsSeptember 9, 2018 at 4:54 PM

    I love this story! It’s so cute and fluffy. XD In my head, Lizzie mails the letters years later when she meets him again in college, but anonymously...*dun dun dun*. XD

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    1. Lisa ElisSeptember 17, 2018 at 11:17 AM

      wooooooo ZANE WE NEED A SEQUEL STORY NOW!!

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    2. Zane JonesSeptember 17, 2018 at 2:39 PM

      Oooh I like it!! I shall leave the ending to your imaginations :P

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  5. Zane JonesSeptember 9, 2018 at 5:26 PM

    Hi yes I hate reading my own writiiiiiiiiing xD

    Thanks so much for posting this, Lisa!! <3 And that graphic you made is SO cute, I love it!!

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  6. Skye HoffertSeptember 10, 2018 at 8:02 AM

    This is so good! Love that it's written as a letter.

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  7. VanessaSeptember 11, 2018 at 1:25 PM

    Oh these are the kind of feels that fill my soul!
    Simply Me

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  8. Catherine HawthornSeptember 12, 2018 at 11:40 AM

    I love the letter format! Great story, Zane!

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